This week, we wrote four-paragraph news stories based on the information on page 169 of our text, Reporting for the Media. To the facts we found there about a Centers for Disease Control report on American marriages, you added a quote or two from links found on Springboard.
CDC Story #1
Marriage lasts longer when partners do not live with each other before marriage, according to a study released by the Centers for Disease Control.
In the study of 50,000 women, 40 percent of couples who live together before marriage broke up after 10 years. This is compared to 31 percent of couples who did not live together before marriage.
Dr. Ed Sondik, director of CDC’s National Center for Health Statistics, said researchers looked beyond how living together before marriage affects the duration of marriages.
“We’ve also attempted to look beyond the influence of individual characteristics and are looking more at the characteristics of the community at large to get a comprehensive picture of what factors impact marriage and divorce rates in this country,” he said.
The CDC found couples at a greater risk for divorce tend to be young, less wealthy and less religious.
CDC Story #2
Couples are at a greater risk for divorce when they live together before they marry, the Centers for Disease Control announced Wednesday.
After 10 years of marriage, 40 percent of couples who had lived together before marriage had broken up. This is compared with 31 percent of those couples who did not live together before marriage.
Additionally, researchers concluded that 43 percent of married couples break up within 15 years.
“In the United States during the second half of the 20th century, the proportion of people’s lives spent in marriage declined due to postponement of marriage to later ages and higher rates of divorce,” according to the report.
Additional risk factors that lead to divorce include being less religious, not having a college education and not being as wealthy.
CDC Story #3
Couples who live together before marriage tend to have traits that put them at a greater risk for divorce, according to a newly released study of American marriage.
The study, conducted by researchers from the Centers for Disease Control, surveyed 50,000 women. It found that 40 percent of couples who had lived together before marriage divorced after 10 years. Only 31 percent of married couples who had not lived together had broken up during the same time period.
Researchers expanded the study “beyond the basic ‘bookends’ of marriage and divorce to look more closely at how the issue of cohabitation impacts the life of a relationship,” explained Dr. Ed Sondik, director of CDC’s National Center for Health Statistics.
Overall, researchers found that 43 percent of marriages end within 15 years. Wealthy, religious, college-educated women stand the best chance of making their marriages last.
Released Wednesday, the study also found that half of U.S. women had lived with a partner by age 30. Seventy percent of couples who lived together for at least five years eventually married.
CDC Story #4
Couples who live together before marriage have a greater risk of divorce, according to researchers from the Centers for Disease Control.
In a major study of American marriages, researchers found that 40 percent of couples who lived together before marriage had broken up within 10 years, compared to 31 percent of couples who did not live together.
While the report lists many possible factors that contribute to the success or failure of a relationship, researchers concluded that “community prosperity is related to successful cohabitations and marriages.”
The CDC found that the odds of a marriage surviving longer than one decade are also increased when the woman is wealthy, religious, college-educated and at least 20 years old.
CDC Story #5
People living in affluent communities are more likely to have enduring relationships, according to a study released by the Centers for Disease Control on Wednesday.
People living in communities with higher incomes, lower crime rates and higher education levels tend to have more successful unions, the study reported. These living conditions result in more stable cohabitations and durable marriages.
The study was conducted on 50,000 American women from assorted races, backgrounds and incomes. According to the report, there is nothing to contradict the conclusion that a community’s affluence is a major factor in all relationships.

23 responses so far ↓
dawn // September 28, 2009 at 2:00 pm |
i believe number two, it gives the facts and number, but is also able to read and not confuse a reader.
Shaina // September 28, 2009 at 2:00 pm |
I think the fourth story is the best because it is rather short and does not try to fit too much information in each sentence so as to overwhelm the reader.
A Didato // September 28, 2009 at 2:00 pm |
I thought the first story was well-written because the following paragraphs after the lead supported it. Also, while reading the story I felt it flowed very similarly to many articles I have read in newspapers.
Leigh Ann // September 28, 2009 at 1:59 pm |
I thought that four was the best because it flowed well and was concise.
Jamie // September 28, 2009 at 1:59 pm |
I think that the first story is the best because each paragraph supported the lead. Also the quotes made a good connection with the story.
Gina // September 28, 2009 at 1:58 pm |
I chose story 2, because I felt that they used the information well and got the point across clearly
ron davidoff // September 28, 2009 at 1:58 pm |
I think the last one was the best, because it contained the least amount of confusing numbers and was written in a more positive way.
Melissa // September 28, 2009 at 1:58 pm |
I like number two best because it was straight, simple, and to the point. It also had a good flow.
Adrienne S. // September 28, 2009 at 1:57 pm |
I thought the first story was the best out of all them. The set up for the story has a great flow and the sources used in the story are on topic and straight to the point.
Kate // September 28, 2009 at 1:57 pm |
I thought the third story was the best. It organized it’s ideas and supported the lead well.
rachel // September 28, 2009 at 12:22 pm |
i thought the first story was best because it supported its lead very well and had good transitions
Megan Smutak // September 28, 2009 at 10:49 am |
I thought the first and fifth news stories were the best. They were both straight to the point and were organized in a clear and easy to read form.
Vince Pozar // September 28, 2009 at 10:48 am |
I liked the fourth story because I felt it flowed the best and all the paragraphs stuck together.
Zac Kasparek // September 28, 2009 at 10:45 am |
I chose #2 becasue it was a good job how they put the statistics and the quotations in the article.
fieldwithclouds // September 28, 2009 at 10:44 am |
the first lead supports the information and transitions well paragraph to paragraph.
ursula // September 28, 2009 at 10:44 am |
I really liked story #4 because it gives enough information to have four paragraphs, including a quotation. The writer approaches a different point-of-view than most of the stories, at least in its main point (the quote). The paragraphs support and expand on the lead as well.
Rachael // September 28, 2009 at 10:44 am |
I voted for the fourth story because the lead is interesting, the story is short and concise. I liked the used of the partial quote and the facts were not repeated.
Jimmy Bigley // September 28, 2009 at 10:42 am |
I thought the second story was the best because it was concise, and because it had the most important information first. The quote was also placed rather well and didn’t stand out awkwardly.
fieldwithclouds // September 28, 2009 at 10:42 am |
the first lead supports the information and transitions well.
David Sickels // September 28, 2009 at 10:32 am |
I thought the fourth story was the best written. It gives all the important facts from most important to least, includes a quote, and isn’t written in a confusing way.
tiarrah kent // September 28, 2009 at 10:29 am |
story # 2 was the best. i feel this way because it was short and concise. it also covered the important facts in the story, it did not take away from the lead.
Amanda Viau // September 27, 2009 at 11:20 pm |
I thought the fifth story was best because, even though it did not include a quote, the second and third paragraphs went really well with the lead and made complete sense.
Fred // September 27, 2009 at 11:17 pm |
All stories we’re decent as being a first attempt at writing more than just a lead…